5 comments
  1. “conferred upon the solar system” … what a nice line — we should all be so lucky to say the same about our lives

    • Thanks! And thank you for such a lovely comment. I hadn’t thought about the final poem as a challenge to the reader to live the “valuable life,” but you’re absolutely right that it’s there implicit in the final poem. Great find.

      • I was probably feeling the need to be challenged when I read your poem… and those lines sent a clear message. thanks again!

  2. You continue to make me jealous with your redacting skills… 🙂

  3. Can you please contact me regarding using this image for a book cover? I would like to use it for Redacted Story, an anthology collection of creative writing. kystory.wordpress.org

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